The environment is good. Only the lip sync, throwing controller and green t-shirt sleeve are a bit off.
The environment is good. Only the lip sync, throwing controller and green t-shirt sleeve are a bit off.
I appreciate the criticism !
Not bad character rig! The lip sync is a bit unfinished and perhaps her screams could use a little more exaggeration.
Thanks for the feedback !! You’re so right ! it was my first time doing like really exaggerated movement and expressions so i’ll keep an eye on that stuff in future :) thank you
BONK, nice loop! ^^
The proportions for the black T-shirt guy are a bit off, I also just noticed the missing coloring of his hand and beard at the last frames.
Thank you for that notice for last frames, I just noticed it...
The animation quality is so good along with the music! I wish there were more events happening.
Thank you so much!
Hah, I agree :') but I tend to keep adding things and then slowly loosing interest and never finishing the project.
I'd love to make more complex MV next time tho! Now with better time management!
The animation is more or less fine, I feel like the images could be turned into drawings.
I'm a lazy fat slob and I would never be able to do that. Although I might consider doing that later on..
Even though I have no idea about the nightmare critters fan comics, I still consider it as a very good attempt to showcase the performances of many VA's in this comic dub ^^
Giving 3 stars due to it's shortness and lack of smooth animation transitions.
Thank you so much for the feedback!^^ We’re still relatively new to making these comics+dubs so this helps out a ton for future projects
Fine work!
thank you!
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